The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two maps compare an
island
before and after some tourist facilities were constructed and development carried out for tourism purposes.
Overall
, with the accommodation and other facilities built for tourists, the
island
has been transformed into a tourist attraction
also
views were created to grant access to the
island
by boat. Originally the
island
was completely undeveloped. Before development started, it contained only a beach and a number of trees occupied some parts after development.
However
, two accommodation areas with footpaths have been built in the centre and west of the
island
respectively. A pier could be seen
on
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that is
constructed for boats from there on left a vehicle track can be spotted which directs to the area of reception and restaurant and
then
footpath
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a footpath
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can be seen which directs
to
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tourists to the beach .swimming facility is available with ease .toward the right of the pier another accommodation place can be noticed for tourists .tress can be seen in both the maps there was no wood cutting two maps below show an
island
, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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