Men and women employed in full time Jobs should share the responsibilities of household chores. Do you agree or disagree. Share relevant personal experiences.

Gender equality is a reality in

this

current modern world,

thus

most

men

and

women

are employed in

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full time

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jobs. Many people believe that both

men

and

women

should share the responsibilities of household chores equally and I strongly agree with

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statement

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I will elaborate more in the following paragraphs. Nowadays, in

this

modern era, most

men

and

women

need to work to be able to support their family's needs and costs.

Moreover

, I believe that they should share the chores of the

house

alternately or together. My husband is the one to return

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home before me,mostly

everyday

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, so, he starts to cook for the

kids

. If he would have waited for me to cook, it is sure that I would be exhausted and the dinner would be served late. Eventually, all couples should do

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proper planning of the task loads at home to be able to care for the

kids

and have a balanced life.

Conversely

, there are some

men

who have their

ego

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and

therefore

do not help at all at home. Sadly, the

women

are exhausted,

feel

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alone and there might be some misunderstanding in their couple as well. I think every parent should encourage their

kids

since

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a young, irrespective of their gender to help

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the chore of the

house

. When a woman has the support of his life partner, she feels complete and is encouraged to perform more. To exemplify, my husband is the one to get the

kids

ready to go to school as I need to leave the

house

early each morning as I have

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along

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distance to travel. In conclusion, I strongly believe that both

men

and

women

need to distribute among them the

house

responsibilities equally for the

well being

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of their

kids

and their partners. All parents should encourage their

kids

for

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equal sharing of household tasks and

finally

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when they grow up, it becomes a habit and a culture.