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Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Animals
 have been used since old age for doing difficult multitasks. Two groups of people have two different opinions, the
first
 group states that using
animals
 for benefit of humanity is totally okay . While
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 the other group have an opinion that it is totally wrong to exploit
animals
 for human usage . Both views are discussed
further
 in
this
 essay before giving an opinion .
Firstly
, the usage of
animals
 for the benefit of humans is okay when it comes to the case of domestic
animals
 like
dogs
 , cat , goat and cow . Pet
animals
 give required food products like milk , egg and meat . Pet
animals
 are given good care because they provide essential goods .
Dogs
 are rapidly used in houses for both protection and as a pet . Children love to play and take care of
such
animals
 .
Secondly
, when it comes to the exploitation of
animals
 , it is cruelty . wild
animals
 are widely captured from forests to do multitasking jobs . As these
animals
 belong to the forest , they have aggressive behaviour . To resolve
this
 behaviour , these
animals
 are trained and beaten up very badly .
For instance
animals
 like elephants are widely used for both work-related and religious purposes In my opinion , the usage of wild
animals
 for work-related and religious purposes is totally wrong and can't be justified in any manner .
However
, domestic
animals
 like
dogs
 and cats can be kept in houses because they may get a better living in houses rather than in the forest .The Government should strike current laws regarding hunting and animal exploitation . To conclude , Domestic
animals
 like
dogs
 , cats, cows and goats are used for multiple needs of humans. As they provide essential goods , they have been taken good care of. But , wild
animals
 are used widely for completing heavy multitasks and religious purposes . They have been treated very badly and given hard training sessions .
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