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People's lifestyles are changing very rapidly and that is affecting their family relationships. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, with the advancement of technology,
children
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 have a lot of choices that have adverse ramifications for their
development
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. Some people argue that
media
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,
peers
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, and pop culture influence a child's
development
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 while others argue that family plays an important role. I think the family role has a big impact on infants'
development
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 because they learn manners, which are needed throughout their life, and other influenced factors
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 as
media
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, pop culture, and
peers
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 all depend upon their family character. On the one hand,
children
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's
development
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 depends upon their manners and behaviours, which they learned from their family at an early age.
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, their family is the
first
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 instructor, from them they can learn both positive and negative things in their life. With the lack of education, many
parents
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 do not have proper knowledge about the positive
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 of their infants, which leads to adverse consequences.
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, in the Eastern part of Nepal, because of the illiteracy problem of their
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, most of the
children
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 indulge in drugs and tobacco.
On the other hand
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,
media
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, friends and pop cultures
also
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 influence their
development
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.
Children
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 tend to copy their favourite personality's character and like to spend a lot of time with their
peers
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, which type of habit has a great impact on their reading habits. But I think it all depends upon their
parents
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 because if their
parents
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 teach them about the importance of careers and other required skills they would more focus on developing their skills rather than spending time with their
peers
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.
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,
children
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 always demand fashionable clothes that they saw in the
media
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 but it all depends upon family, whether they have to buy them or not. To conclude, different types of
media
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, peer friends, and contemporary shows influence a child's growth but it all depends on how their family treats them. their family is like a remote, so they can control all their behaviour and activities.
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