Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • thank your friend • explain how useful the present is • arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon

Dear, Ravi. I am ecstatic and thrilled to have

such

a friend like you and I would like to express my sincere gratitude from the bottom of my heart for your thoughtfulness and valuable priceless gift which you presented on my birthday. As you know, I am into my graduation studies

hence

, it is mandatory to have a computer or laptop to complete the course assignments.

In addition

, I need to prepare my project along with real-time topics in the industry. I am sure that without your gift I would not complete my course successfully. Seems like, it is been a long time since we did not meet. if possible let us meet for a while.

Furthermore

, you can plan for your stay as well at my place and I will look after everything and all occurred expenses are on me only. I cannot wait anymore to meet you to have a blissful time and I look forward to hearing your`s available date to meet up. Take care..!! Best Regards, Lakshmi.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

171 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

sincerely appreciate
generous gift
means a lot
truly grateful
thoughtfulness
perfect timing
came in handy
can't thank you enough
catch up soon
make plans to meet

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