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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend are outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays the advertising of sporting goods by famous sports players
are
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 growing up, it is giving
an upsides
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 for us, for ambassadors who advertise it, for advertisers and for the whole
company
 generally. But is
this
 contain only perks as we can imagine it?
This
 essay will provide these questions and will separate the advantages and the drawback for parts. If evaluate
this
 situation from a marketing point of view, it has
a
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such
 a big manipulating, but useful trick of advertising that entails
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 of benefits. The product that was produced by
successful
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a successful
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 person will certainly have
a
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success, because of his positive influence in society,
in
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 social media or in
broadcast
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the broadcast
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. It could attract the attention of
customer
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customers
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 if the product will make a public response.
Secondly
, qualitative advertising is able to bring
a
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much more success
who
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 represented it.
In addition
 to
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 it gives personal benefits for the ambassador as some rebates or even
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discount
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in
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purchasing these products. All of these points are about advantages that on the producer’s side
that
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maintain the up of marketing.
However
, it
also
 has some major drawbacks due to public reaction. The creation that was made by advertisers could be low quality
,
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 or could
has
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 some blunders in
advertisement
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the advertisement
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, and it definitely can destroy the reputation of the
company
’s face and the
company
 itself. It is
usual
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couple
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 of moments in
advertising
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 video that could have been misunderstood in public, related to racism or insulting, even if
company
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the company
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 never meant it. These types of glaring mistakes
first
 of all can affect to
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a celebrity
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celebrity
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celebrities
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 who
advertise
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 it and make
him
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 rejected in society. Every point requires accuracy.
Secondly
, if the brand has a conflict with another brand,
then
 you automatically disable to use
their
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 product because of their relationship in terms of each other, it is one of the rules in a contract.
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 it depends on
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 of
company
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, not on
a
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 fact of making advertisements. To deduction, despite the advertisement with
a
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sports celebrities that could contain
a
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significant shortcomings that are able to make a big collapse and destructive effects, it has an extremely positive impact on
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 marketing industry and actually helps in
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purchasing the goods. I believe that the benefits outweigh the disadvantages
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