Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend are outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the advertising of sporting goods by famous sports players
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growing up, it is giving
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for us, for ambassadors who advertise it, for advertisers and for the whole
company
generally. But is
this
contain only perks as we can imagine it?
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essay will provide these questions and will separate the advantages and the drawback for parts. If evaluate
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situation from a marketing point of view, it has
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such
a big manipulating, but useful trick of advertising that entails
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of benefits. The product that was produced by
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person will certainly have
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success, because of his positive influence in society,
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social media or in
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. It could attract the attention of
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if the product will make a public response.
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, qualitative advertising is able to bring
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much more success
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represented it.
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it gives personal benefits for the ambassador as some rebates or even
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purchasing these products. All of these points are about advantages that on the producer’s side
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maintain the up of marketing.
However
, it
also
has some major drawbacks due to public reaction. The creation that was made by advertisers could be low quality
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or could
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some blunders in
advertisement
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, and it definitely can destroy the reputation of the
company
’s face and the
company
itself. It is
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couple
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of moments in
advertising
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video that could have been misunderstood in public, related to racism or insulting, even if
company
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the company
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never meant it. These types of glaring mistakes
first
of all can affect to
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a celebrity
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celebrity
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celebrities
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who
advertise
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it and make
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rejected in society. Every point requires accuracy.
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, if the brand has a conflict with another brand,
then
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product because of their relationship in terms of each other, it is one of the rules in a contract.
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it depends on
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of
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, not on
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fact of making advertisements. To deduction, despite the advertisement with
a
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sports celebrities that could contain
a
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significant shortcomings that are able to make a big collapse and destructive effects, it has an extremely positive impact on
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marketing industry and actually helps in
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purchasing the goods. I believe that the benefits outweigh the disadvantages
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