Some people prefer one on one lesson while others like group lessons. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Different students have their own choice regarding taking class lessons .Some choose to have individualised classes while others prefer to have group classes .While both preferences have their own pros and cons ,studying in a group instils more skills in a kid .
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,taking courses on an individual basis is best for youngsters who are underconfident attending a class having a bunch of learners .
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,they can join Kumon where the novices are attended on a comfortable level independent of other scholars.
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the students can work
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their own pace .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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