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Some people fail in school, but end up being succesful in life. Why do you think that is the case?What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

#people #school #life #case
Some people struggle
in
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academic
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 in their school, but they still end up getting successful in future. I am more inclined
towards
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 the statement and viewpoints will be elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs. It is not necessary that students who are performing good in
schools
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 will have a bright future. As there are other skills
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plays
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 an important
role
 in deciding your successful
life
.
Firstly
, it is
passion
 plays an important
role
 in having a successful career. If we don’t have
passion
in
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 our
work
 or business we will never have any urge or motivation to perform the
work
.
For instance
, Steve
Jobs
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passion
 was to build something which makes the
life
 of people much easier. His urge of developing things have led to the establishment of a company Apple which is now recognized as one of the major tech company in the world.
In addition
 to
this
, Hands on experience
also
 plays a vital part in
good
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life
. We acquire
this
 skill by working in the industry. If we have
a
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good
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hands-on
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hands on
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 experience in our field, we can have a good
life
. To illustrate, companies spend millions of dollars on their
CEO’s
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 or
CFO’s
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 by providing them with high salary packages as they are
best
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 in the industry. The most important thing which plays an important
role
 in leading a successful
life
 is
passion
. If we don’t have
desire
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the desire
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 or urge to
do
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perform
work
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 which we are currently doing
then
 we will never put more
efforts
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in
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 our
work
. In conclusion, Schools
plays
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 a
role
 as a mentor
for
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 our
life
. But it is not necessary that
individual
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individuals
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 failing in
schools
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school
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 will not have a successful future.
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