In many countries, people now wear western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?
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in various regions around the world Correct your spelling
People
have
a tendency to dress up in western pieces of clothing like suits and jeans, Change the verb form
has
instead
of traditional costumes. This
can be due to those
following reasons.
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the
first
thing is the feeling of inconvenience caused by some sorts
of traditional clothing while performing some acts. Some costumes have really bizarre and complicated designs that contain Fix the agreement mistake
sort
numbers
of small details, which might be an obstacle for any acts requiring speed or flexibility. Fix the agreement mistake
number
Moreover
, it can be a daunting challenge to be on time for whoever is in a hurry while having trouble wearing them neatly. For example
, kimonos have extremely
unusual way to wear which is folding layers of fabric and using a belt to keep them nice and firm.
People have Add an article
an extremely
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the rights
rights
to decide what they wear, as long as they feel comfortable with their choice. Fix the agreement mistake
right
Hence
, wearing traditional clothing should not always be considered as
a must but an option. Change preposition
apply
However
, under some specific circumstances, such
as national festivals, traditionalSubmitted by diemdt on
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