Some people believe they should keep all the money they hove earned and should not pay tax to the state? Do you agree or disagree?

Citizens have different views about paying funds to the government. Some believe that it is necessary while others think that they should keep their hard-earned
money
for themselves. I completely agree with the earlier statement. I think it is absolutely important that every law-abiding citizen should pay their taxes. The funds collected by the government is used to improve and upgrade different public sectors in the
country
such
as the police department, hospitals, educational institute, and government offices.
This
money
is used by the general public of the
country
to boost their living standard, it is
also
used for importing different items from foreign countries and for paying creditors on an international market. It is a dilemma in developing countries because corruption is rampant among the officers that collect taxes. It makes
people
hesitant to give
money
to the officers for the betterment of the
country
when they see no visible results.
For example
, in my
country
, Pakistan a lot of
people
do their monetary duty but no improvement can be seen. There are many ways in which we can encourage tax collection.
Firstly
, the officers in charge and political figures should give the
people
a monthly report on how their
money
is being used.
Secondly
, they could make the paperwork easier and hassle-free,
for instance
, they could launch an online application
that is
connected to the bank to accommodate the taxpayer's lives.
Finally
, they could start an initiative for
people
to pay levies
such
as cash-back schemes and different discounts. In
conclusion
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I would like to say that it is the basic duty of every citizen to facilitate the governmental officials by paying their due on time and they should help other
people
do the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribute
  • welfare
  • public services
  • progressive taxation
  • distribution of wealth
  • civic duty
  • social cohesion
  • tax evasion
  • economic disparities
  • social unrest
  • individual rights
  • societal responsibilities
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