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Nowadays itis seen that many student are part time worked. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of this system?

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Across countries, it has been considered that huge numbers of pupils are involved with work while they attend their educational institutions.
This
 essay will discuss some benefits and
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 of drawbacks of
this
 trend.
First
 and foremost , temporary working opportunities can lead to several positive sides for learners.
Firstly
, students remain pretty confident and street smart,
thus
 becoming independent early.
Secondly
,
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part
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time
 working chances boost their work capacity
,
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makes them skilled, and,at the same
time
, it gives them more experience.
As a result
, they are able to communicate with their superiors and are able to collaborate with other members of staff when they get into
full
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time
 employment.
Finally
, they contribute to their
families
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 overall income, which helps to improve their
well being
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.
On the other hand
, beyond these obvious benefits, it
also
 carries various distinct disadvantages. Most importantly,
such
 students are unable to concentrate on their academic subjects which
diminishes
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 the opportunity to accomplish expected scores because they spend a considerable figure of hours at their workstation and they barely find any period for
self study
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.
Moreover
, these young generations fall into a habit of making easy money which often distracts them from their principal aspirations. To sum up, despite the different views, it can be said that
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since
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part
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time
 working opportunity help them to buildup confidence but it
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sometime
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 enable them to devote
completely
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themselves completely
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 to the educational program.
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