Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Fossil

fuels

are the most essential

resources

for transportation, heating and other electrical devices. Despite being used in many parts of human life, they are not unlimited and will probably run out in the near future. In

this

essay, I will give some proposals about how to use fossil

fuels

economically, and

then

suggest alternative renewable

resources

First

of all, the rate of change in modern human life is much more than in the past century and humanity needs more

energy

than ever. Fossil

fuels

were used to meet humans' requirements in many ways and, now we are facing the scarcity of these

energy

resources

. To combat

this

problem, governments, international organizations and NGOs took an action and propose policies that guide people on how to reduce

energy

consumption.

For instance

, the Turkey Ministry of

Energy

and Natural

Resources

and the Ministry of National Education worked collaboratively and added classes on the conservation of

energy

resources

to the national curriculum.

On the other hand

, some sanctions on overusing electricity in certain countries are another example of

this

policy.

In addition

to fossil

fuels

conservation policies, we must shift our attention to renewable

energy

resources

since there are a huge number of bachelor's degree programs in urbanization and

energy

that help us. Water, wind and the Sun are relatively more useful compared with fossil

fuels

because they are all-natural.

Moreover

, the research paper shows that renewable

energy

resources

have

little

Add an article

a little

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detrimental effect on nature and can be used nearly everywhere.

As a result

, humanity now facing the problem of the exhaustion of essential

fuels

. To overcome

this

problem, all human beings must be educated about how to use traditional

resources

effectively and the slow transition from fossil

fuels

to renewable

resources

must be promoted.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

293 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include: – A brief introduction of yourself – Your experience and relevant skills – Why you want the job

People doing dangerous sports activities like scuba diving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports.do you agree or disagree?