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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world's fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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Fossil
fuels
 are the most essential
resources
 for transportation, heating and other electrical devices. Despite being used in many parts of human life, they are not unlimited and will probably run out in the near future. In
this
 essay, I will give some proposals about how to use fossil
fuels
 economically, and
then
 suggest alternative renewable
resources
.
First
 of all, the rate of change in modern human life is much more than in the past century and humanity needs more
energy
 than ever. Fossil
fuels
 were used to meet humans' requirements in many ways and, now we are facing the scarcity of these
energy
resources
. To combat
this
 problem, governments, international organizations and NGOs took an action and propose policies that guide people on how to reduce
energy
 consumption.
For instance
, the Turkey Ministry of
Energy
 and Natural
Resources
 and the Ministry of National Education worked collaboratively and added classes on the conservation of
energy
resources
 to the national curriculum.
On the other hand
, some sanctions on overusing electricity in certain countries are another example of
this
 policy.
In addition
 to fossil
fuels
 conservation policies, we must shift our attention to renewable
energy
resources
 since there are a huge number of bachelor's degree programs in urbanization and
energy
 that help us. Water, wind and the Sun are relatively more useful compared with fossil
fuels
 because they are all-natural.
Moreover
, the research paper shows that renewable
energy
resources
 have
little
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 detrimental effect on nature and can be used nearly everywhere.
As a result
, humanity now facing the problem of the exhaustion of essential
fuels
. To overcome
this
 problem, all human beings must be educated about how to use traditional
resources
 effectively and the slow transition from fossil
fuels
 to renewable
resources
 must be promoted.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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