Writing an application letter to an organisation working with children to volunteer for a part-time job. Please say - why do you want to work there? - why are you suitable for this job? - when will you be able to start?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you

this

letter regarding the advert published in today's newspaper 'The New India Times' ,volunteer part-time job. My name is Pooja and I am a psychology student at Technocarats college. I would like to join your organization because, I believe everyone should do some kind of social work in their life , and here I am getting

this

opportunity so I said to myself why not.

Moreover

, It is near to my home and I am always free after my college hours. I could say, I would be the most suitable person for your organisation ,

firstly

I am living nearby area,

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and secondly

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I am a psychology student so I can easily manage with children , and

this

will

also

help in my internship in future. As mentioned in the

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that you need someone urgently, so I am available from

Monday onwards. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Pooja Raikwar

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

160 words

7.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Writing an application letter to an organisation working with children to volunteer for a part-time job. Please say - why do you want to work there? - why are you suitable for this job? - when will you be able to start?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

14.With computers and the Internet, people can study and work without going to school or a company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they got on a business trip. Is it a positive or negative in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.