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Nowadays many mothers take care of the family and don’t go out to work. Some people believe they should be given salaries by the government. 🔸Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, contemporary females to look after the family do not have an occupation. In my opinion, the government should give unemployment benefits to these people. There are multiple reasons why
mothers
 do not go out to
work
.
Firstly
, they are doing housework for other members of the family like washing dishes or clothes and ironing and cooking because we need all of these things for our lifespan and If we are working we need somebody to make for us.
Secondly
, they might have one baby or two babies these children will grow up but early age a baby needs her mother for all activities so how can these
mothers
 go to
work
 under these conditions?
Moreover
, If they look for an occupation, they face some obstacles like specials companies do not want female workers because of pregnancy.
Finally
, they can not want to
work
 where they expose to mobbing. I see eye to eye with the government
has
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having
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 to give unemployment benefits or child
money
 to
mothers
 because of some causes. They need
money
 for individual necessities.
Furthermore
, our moms are working for the country by raising the children and
this
 occupation is more important than others. We should be kind and helpful to housewives and we can show
this
 by paying
money
. . If there is one person who is working for the family expenses
this
 cash is not enough for all family members and the authority should support these people. In conclusion, I agree with the state must give
money
 to housewives because they
work
 for family members
in addition
 no one can not say that the
mothers
 do not
work
.
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