I recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers trave to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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Nowadays
,
people
have more buying
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options
, it can be seen, that popularity of big shopping
mall
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,
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is increasing day by day,
as a result
, local shops are
lossing
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losing
their clients. From
customer's
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the customer's
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point of view,
this
is a positive approach.
People
can buy many things at one and other facilities.
Prices
can
be control
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due to
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competitions
compitions
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competition
in the
market
.
Firstly
,
retail
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market
has
bombarded
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, due to big companies have been
involving
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in it, not only that but
also
multiple brands are
inviated
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invited
by them with other facilities at one location.
For example
, Walmart is available in major cities and
offeringdaily
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offering daily
need
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products
, at cheaper
prices
.
Moreover
, they provide other facilities to attract the customers,
such
as cashless payment
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option
, delivery at door step without extra charges, cafes and play
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area
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for children.
Besides
that,
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they
there
provide replacement
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facilities
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for
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damage
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products
at any branch, which
are
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located in
differnt
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different
locations.
Thus
,
people
can save money, time and
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energy
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energy
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due
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dut
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due
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to
this
revolution.
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,
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competition
is
best
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way to control
rising
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the rising
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prices
of the
products
. In previous days,
people
had
less
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fewer
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buying options.
consequently
, local
shopkeers
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shopkeepers
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were
wre
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are
taking hire
prices
. To illustrate, a single product is sold by many shopkeepers at different
prices
,
people
buy
this
from
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the shop
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shop
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shops
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where
price
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the price
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is lower.
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, all
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retailers
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retailors
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retailers
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need to control their selling
prices
to stuck in the
market
. To conclude, big malls and retail
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industries
industires
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industries
have
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change
chage
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changed
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of
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the retail
market
.
however
,
this
approach does not impact negatively
on
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local
shopkeers
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shopkeepers
, who
has
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updated their strategy to
sale
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the
products
.
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