Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that there is a highly

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beneficial

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benefit

if

students

have opportunities to pursue their education in foreign countries. Personally,

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agree with the

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assertion

that a country derives enormous benefits from abroad

students

. On the one hand, there are many benefits for young people if they

study

overseas. Through

study

abroad

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it helps people to boost their confidence and be more independent. By learning in other nations, they would have to get out of their comfort zone to get used to a completely different environment.

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the

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student who

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oversea have a good chance to improve their language skill

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communicating

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with native speakers on

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basis

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help them not to

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and

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confidence

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on

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their

abilty

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ability

. It can be seen that

this

would help them establish business relationships with foreign

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partners

parners

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partners

in the future.

On the other hand

, having way

sudents

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students

being educated overseas could be advantageous to society as a whole.

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, Vietnamese

students

studying at US universities might decide to stay where they

study

which

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to shortage of labour resources. It can be seen that with modern facilities, great environment some people ideal locations for living which make some developing

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countries

are highly declining human resources in significant fields. In conclusion, studying abroad

student

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play

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important role in developing countries whereas it will have side effects

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students

are attracted by the countries where they

study

.