Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and diseas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays ,

Pollution

and housing problem is one of the major cause of various types of diseases.

According to

some ,folks it is the whole sole

government

's

responsibility

to focus on these problems which will lead to good human life , I partially agree with

this

statement as it should be the citizen's

responsibility

as well. The same will be discussed in

further

paragraphs with a suitable conclusion . To commence with,

Firstly

, the

government

should definitely pass some laws to reduce

pollution

,

for example

, stop releasing untreated water from factories in water bodies so that the general public of that area won't consume polluted water . Another example, improving refuse collection from door to door so that housing problems can be improved .

Moreover

, the

government

can run some awareness programmes so that the general public will become more conscious of how a polluted environment can lead to severe illness .

On the other hand

, it is not only the

government

's

responsibility

to take care of these issues , being responsible citizens of the country everyone should help in

this

.

Such

as stopping

using

Verb problem

apply

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one-time plastic means it can not be reused , another example , is focusing on recycling or at least sorting garbage in different bins so that

government

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the government

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can manage it

further

.

Moreover

, stop throwing rubbish anywhere , it should be thrown in bins only . Try to make the earth greener by plantation

such

as planting more trees which will possibly lead to a reduction in environmental

pollution

and will help in preventing disease.

To conclude

,

Definitely

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Definitely,

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government

should focus on

pollution

and housing problems issue by raising awareness

that

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of

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how detrimental it could be to humans life and can lead to illness or disease but it should be individual

responsibility

as well to take care of their surroundings which can help them to live a better and healthy life.