Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help prevent illness and diseas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays ,

Pollution

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and housing problem is one of the major cause of various types of diseases.

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some ,folks it is the whole sole

government

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's

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to focus on these problems which will lead to good human life , I partially agree with

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statement as it should be the citizen's

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as well. The same will be discussed in

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paragraphs with a suitable conclusion . To commence with,

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, the

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should definitely pass some laws to reduce

pollution

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, stop releasing untreated water from factories in water bodies so that the general public of that area won't consume polluted water . Another example, improving refuse collection from door to door so that housing problems can be improved .

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, the

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can run some awareness programmes so that the general public will become more conscious of how a polluted environment can lead to severe illness .

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, it is not only the

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to take care of these issues , being responsible citizens of the country everyone should help in

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as stopping

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one-time plastic means it can not be reused , another example , is focusing on recycling or at least sorting garbage in different bins so that

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government

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can manage it

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, stop throwing rubbish anywhere , it should be thrown in bins only . Try to make the earth greener by plantation

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as planting more trees which will possibly lead to a reduction in environmental

pollution

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and will help in preventing disease.

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government

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should focus on

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and housing problems issue by raising awareness

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how detrimental it could be to humans life and can lead to illness or disease but it should be individual

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as well to take care of their surroundings which can help them to live a better and healthy life.