You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there is any local events happening at the time

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Dear Sir or Madam, Next month, on the twenty-first of May, I will be visiting

Luxur

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, and I am writing to give you the details of my short trip and ask for some information about that town. In relation to the duration of my visit, I am planning to spend the 3-day period of the weekend in

Luxur

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, I have booked a train ticket on the twenty-first of May from Cairo to

Luxur

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, and my return trip is scheduled to be on the twenty-third of May. I would like to ask for your recommendations for the activities that can be done there. Kindly, note that not only would these outdoor activities appeal to teenagers, but

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could attract the attention of young children.

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the fact that I will accompany my children with me to

Luxur

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, and I am sure they will enjoy horse riding.

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, could you possibly inform me if local people would be celebrating any traditional ceremony during our period of stay just as Easter? Despite our short stay, we are looking forward to exploring more about the traditional background of

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historical town by enjoying its folklore. Thank you in advance for your prompt response. Faithfully, Mohamed Khaled

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task response

Overall, the response addresses all aspects of the task. However, to improve task response, provide more specific details about the children's age and interests for better recommendations.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure is clear, and there is a suitable tone of formality in the letter. To enhance coherence and cohesion, ensure smoother transitions between paragraphs and provide a clearer connection between the children's interests and activities recommended.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

206 words

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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there is any local events happening at the time

In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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