You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information centre. In your letter Tell how long you are staying Ask for some suggestions for what to do Find out if there is any local events happening at the time

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Dear Sir or Madam, Next month, on the twenty-first of May, I will be visiting
Luxur
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, and I am writing to give you the details of my short trip and ask for some information about that town. In relation to the duration of my visit, I am planning to spend the 3-day period of the weekend in
Luxur
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, I have booked a train ticket on the twenty-first of May from Cairo to
Luxur
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, and my return trip is scheduled to be on the twenty-third of May. I would like to ask for your recommendations for the activities that can be done there. Kindly, note that not only would these outdoor activities appeal to teenagers, but
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could attract the attention of young children.
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the fact that I will accompany my children with me to
Luxur
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, and I am sure they will enjoy horse riding.
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, could you possibly inform me if local people would be celebrating any traditional ceremony during our period of stay just as Easter? Despite our short stay, we are looking forward to exploring more about the traditional background of
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historical town by enjoying its folklore. Thank you in advance for your prompt response. Faithfully, Mohamed Khaled
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Overall, the response addresses all aspects of the task. However, to improve task response, provide more specific details about the children's age and interests for better recommendations.
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The logical structure is clear, and there is a suitable tone of formality in the letter. To enhance coherence and cohesion, ensure smoother transitions between paragraphs and provide a clearer connection between the children's interests and activities recommended.
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