A lot of places in the world rely on tourist as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. what are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Many countries worldwide consider
tourism
as a principal source of income. However
, if it is not correctly regulated it will also
be troublesome. This
essay will discuss the main advantage
and Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
disadvantage
of Fix the agreement mistake
disadvantages
tourism
including being a push up
to the nation's Add a hyphen
push-up
economy
and how it could be annoying to locals
. I believe that the pros of tourism
overshadow its cons.
One of the greatest benefits of tourism
is the fact that it creates numerous job opportunities for locals
which contribute in
the prosperity of Change preposition
to
economy
. Add an article
the economy
an economy
In other words
, unemployment won't be an issue in such
touristic countries since they are usually considred
an excellent destination for investors and a magnificent land for companies to expand their branches. Correct your spelling
considered
For example
, young adults with or without high
degree won't struggle to secure a job with all the provided opportunities. Correct article usage
a high
Thus
, tourism
can play a pivotal role in local and national economy
Fix the agreement mistake
economies
thrive
.
Wrong verb form
thriving
On the other hand
, one of the main drawbacks of welcoming a huge amount of tourists throughout the year is that locals
are put under pressured
and unfavourable Replace the word
pressure
condition
because the Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
street
are constantly crowded leading to bottleneck roads. Commuters are often faced with traffic jams and overcrowded public transportation which is a serious problem that can negatively affect the professional and academic life of many workers and students. Fix the agreement mistake
streets
For instance
, it is a daily challenge for students who have to compete to secure a place in
the bus to make it at time to school. Change preposition
on
Therefore
, tourism
is a source of stress for locals
if the road infrastructure can not cope with the visitors
volume.
In conclusion, despite being a main source of income which is a great support to the local and national Change to a genitive case
visitor's
visitors'
economy
, tourism
with non-adapted infrastructure is a serious issue. Although
tourism
have
Change the verb form
has
a certain downsides
, I believe its advantages are greater by far.Correct the article-noun agreement
a certain downside
certain downsides
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