Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

Dear Mr Wong, I am writing

this

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letter in regard to the

last

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dishwasher pipe repair, where the plumber changed the water pipeline. But ,

still

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still,

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there is

some

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issue with the pipe connection. Now the dishwasher is taking so much time to clean the utensils ,

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is taking more than the regular time

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, like

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3-4 hours . which will lead to high hydro bills and water wastage itself . I am not sure about the exact issue

but

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, but

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probably

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the

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pipeline connections are not proper

which

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, which

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is why during the rinse

time

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time,

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it is not getting

proper

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a proper

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water supply.

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due to

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pressure

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pressure,

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sometimes the system causes emergency shutdowns. I would kindly request , to send a plumber again so that he can do the repair work properly ,

Possibly

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possibly

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weekend

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the weekend

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, so that I can supervise him directly and check if it is working properly or not. I hope you will address

this

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concern as soon as possible . Yours faithfully, Pooja

pooja.raikwar27

Sep 17, 2022

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content

In the letter, add one clear plan. State what must be done and by when. Keep one idea in one paragraph.

form

Fix small form: use full sentences and proper spacing. Keep a calm and polite tone.

structure

The letter has a good start with a greeting and a closing.

tone

It asks for action in a polite way.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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