You live in a room in a college where you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. He/She has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Reham from the North block 22nd room and I am writing
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, my roommate is playing the guitar every day and it causes a lot of noise which affect me a lot during my study. As you know I have a very crucial exam and it has been very tough
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me to focus on study.
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, she arranges a party every weekend and invites her friends to our room without telling me
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I told her that these activities are not appropriate for me. I do not think I can bear
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situation, and I would be grateful if you can move me to a separate room even if it means that I’ll pay extra money. I highly expect your kind attention to
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situation and I look forward to hearing your response very soon. Yours faithfully,
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