You live in a room in a college where you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. He/She has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Reham from the North block 22nd room and I am writing

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letter to apprise you about the problem that I am facing with my roommate who makes me inconvenienced.

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, my roommate is playing the guitar every day and it causes a lot of noise which affect me a lot during my study. As you know I have a very crucial exam and it has been very tough

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me to focus on study.

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, she arranges a party every weekend and invites her friends to our room without telling me

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I told her that these activities are not appropriate for me. I do not think I can bear

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situation, and I would be grateful if you can move me to a separate room even if it means that I’ll pay extra money. I highly expect your kind attention to

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situation and I look forward to hearing your response very soon. Yours faithfully,

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In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

163 words

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It is said that it is a good idea to have three or four generations living under one roof. What’s your opinion? Use your specific reasons and examples to support your idea. You should write about 250 words.

some people say that a lot of scientific research done today is a waste of time and money. what extent do you agree or disagree?

Drug abuse is becoming increasingly common in the world today. What problems does this cause and what are some of the measures that can be taken to solve these problems?

Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.