Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

People have different views about whether

children

should decide what they want in daily life by themselves. While a spirit of

considerate

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can sometimes be appreciated by

others

, I believe that the ability

of making

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to make

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decisions is more significant. On the one hand,

children

who

deciding

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decide

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things by themselves are likely to become more independent in the future.

Firstly

, it is important to cultivate

children

's

self-conscious

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self-consciousness

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in their childhood, knowing exactly what they want, so they are not going to feel lost when deciding their own life path

afterward

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.

For example

, some

children

, who always listen to their parents in their growing life, tend to rely on

others

to tell them what to do.

Secondly

, encouraging kids to choose what they

wants

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is able to increase their self-confidence, which can be seen as telling them that their ideas and suggestions matter.

Finally

, since they have to take the consequences of making these choices, they need to think carefully, and

this

will enhance their ability

of

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judgement.

On the other hand

, making their own decisions can sometimes cause individuals who consider themselves more than thinking about

others

, which is to say, more selfish. The lack of concerning

others

'

opinion

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might lead to negative social impacts on themselves.

For instance

, people who have less inclination to consider

others

' needs compare

with

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think

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thinking

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about their own, gain less popularity than people constantly taking care of

others

.

Moreover

, they might show reluctance to

listen

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others

' suggestions with different voices

against

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from

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their own. In conclusion, even though there are some positive effects

for

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of

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children

not

think

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thinking

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about themselves that frequently,

yet

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apply

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the advantages of making decisions about their own wishes are far more valued.