In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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is one of the integral
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responsible for a
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there are disadvantages of
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cars, I believe with thorough experimentation they can be
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addition to the upcoming transformation. On one hand,
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of driverless vehicles will have an adverse effect on the driver's jobs because they will be no longer needed in near future.
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relying on
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for
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of humans,
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be very risky because malfunctioning can happen anytime and it would lead to
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. Usually, public
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systems
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are centrally managed and if
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gets attacked, each and every vehicle managed by
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will get affected risking
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hundreds and thousands of lives.
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, countries could attack through viruses to disturb the central machine intelligence of other countries before starting a war.
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, the advantages of driverless vehicles are far more when compared
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its
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disadvantages. Malfunctioning of machines is common and can be easily resolved by repeated
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experimentation
before actually implementing. An
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efficient
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driverless system will enhance human life by predicting suitable speed,
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timings which will lead to fewer accidents, particularly drunk and drive cases with
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sharply. People can enjoy car rides without even having to learn driving and
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likewise
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those who fear
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driving will
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be encouraged to travel. Drawing from my own experience, after an accident, I started avoiding driving since I feared getting hit again.
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introduction to
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advancement
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will definitely make travelling comfortable. In conclusion, I strongly believe that
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automobiles will become indispensable to
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human life easier and
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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