In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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cars, I believe with thorough experimentation they can be

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addition to the upcoming transformation. On one hand,

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of driverless vehicles will have an adverse effect on the driver's jobs because they will be no longer needed in near future.

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for

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of humans,

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be very risky because malfunctioning can happen anytime and it would lead to

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hundreds and thousands of lives.

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, countries could attack through viruses to disturb the central machine intelligence of other countries before starting a war.

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, the advantages of driverless vehicles are far more when compared

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disadvantages. Malfunctioning of machines is common and can be easily resolved by repeated

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experimentation

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driverless system will enhance human life by predicting suitable speed,

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timings which will lead to fewer accidents, particularly drunk and drive cases with

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sharply. People can enjoy car rides without even having to learn driving and

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those who fear

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driving will

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introduction to

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will definitely make travelling comfortable. In conclusion, I strongly believe that

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automobiles will become indispensable to

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human life easier and

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