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Social media has become a very effective method of communication. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on individual and society. Do the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantage?

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Nowadays, Social
media
 has become a popular way to communicate with someone.
On the other hand
, there are controversial problems that impact
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individual
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 and society. In
this
 essay, I discuss
profit
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the profit
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 and drawbacks of the usage of social
media
. The main profit of using social
media
 is the
usefulness
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 of instant communication with someone. If a person who lives in Japan posts an opinion on his Twitter, he could receive replies from all over the world. Anonymity is
also
 a feature of social
media
, and it makes it easier to express
opinions
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the opinions
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 of
people
. These features not only make
more
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the more
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 active discussion about political or social issues
,
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 but
also
 contribute positively joining to
politics
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the politics
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 of young
people
. Because
young
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the young
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 generation is the main user of social
media
, they can collect various information related to social topics.
However
, it can say offensive comments to a specific person,
for example
, actors, athletes and models,
is
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the
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 huge problem
in
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 social
media
. Anonymity escalates to
express
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 excessive opinions to
such
 a person, and it will disturb their private lives and mental health.
Furthermore
, the widespread of picture-based social
media
, the lookism that leads to eating disorders and some physical issues
is
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 common among adolescent students.
Also
,
people
 who tend to spend too much time on social
media
 sometimes are addicted to it, and they lose concentration and willingness in daily life. In recent days, social
media
 is a general tool for many
people
, and it has both advantages and disadvantages. While some
people
 have
interest
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an interest
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 in politics and social problems through the usage of social
media
, others are troubled by aggressive posts, excessive lookism, and addiction to it. In my opinion, profit
beyond
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 drawbacks now, but social
media
 enterprises should make better rules for using social
media
 to improve the situation.
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