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Some people like to try new things, for example places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

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Some people are more adventurous by nature and are not afraid of embracing new things, while others may be more cautious when it comes to new areas and have a proclivity to keep doing things that they are accustomed to. I personally prefer doing new activities because
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 and finding out more about my personality. Some people have a tendency toward being in their comfort zone, where they can keep doing the activities they are accustomed to.
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 view may arise from fear, they let their fear runs their life. Going to a new restaurant and ordering a completely new type of food can be terrifying for them. If they want to spot a place for a holiday with their family, they prefer to choose a place, that they already visited before and are familiar with all possible pitfalls laying in their way.
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, being more adventurous, some other people feel ecstatic coping with new situations and discovering some new
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 way, they have the possibility to experience exciting new challenges. To exemplify that, consider trying a completely new food which you never heard of which can result in fathoming the fact that your favourite food is crispy fried cockroaches.
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, because of these new
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, they can reveal the hidden features of their personality. To conclude, I believe the attitude of not fearing the unknown is a blessing which prevents life from being hackneyed. The ability to find out more and more and gain new
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 is a gift for humans to be more aware of their abilities and I think there is no advantage of keep repeating the things that we already discovered and are familiar with every aspect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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