The municipal corporation in the area where you live has decided to demolish a historical building to build a shopping center. Write a letter to the mayor of the corporation. In your letter: You have to explain why it is important to preserve the building suggest how the building can be used to benefit the local community.

Dear Mayor, My name is Maria, residing in Queens Street, Bristol. I am writing

this

letter to express my concern

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demolishing the old

museum

to construct the shopping mall. As you were aware that

this

National

Museum

is one of the oldest historical buildings in our region. It is a signature landmark for

this

location for long years.

This

museum

contains numerous ancient artworks from famous artists and a lot of ancient stuff like swords, jewellery and so on.

Moreover

, the construction itself is unique compared to other monuments. It was built with red rock which is rarely available nowadays. I would like to suggest a few things that you can take into consideration to improve the

museum

and make it beneficial for our community. In my perspective, if we can implement some technological advancements and set up shops can attract many visitors to

this

place. In

this

way, it helps local people to sell some commodities and earn money

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. I believe you will consider

this

and stop demolishing

this

museum

and finds some better place elsewhere to build the shopping centre. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Maria