You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, give details of the last repair work what the problems are now how you would like the landlord to solve these problems

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Dear Mr Kieth, I am writing

this

to bring your attention to a few matters that I am facing after the

last

repair.

To begin

with, let me explain what they did. They did some modifications to the rooftop water tank, because of the leak that we had with it. After that, they repaired the front gate lock, as it was malfunctioning for some reason. Unfortunately,

this

time everything has gone wrong. Now I am facing quite a few problems that happened due to the repair work. Still, the rooftop water tank's leak appears, because I so water is coming down from the pipeline.

Moreover

, now I can not lock the front gate from the inside. I would be if you can please visit here to observe what is happening and get a clear idea about what I am saying. Or else, I you can please send a professional as soon possible to fix these things, I am sure I can fix these things by giving a hand to him. I would appreciate your immediate attention to

this

matter, and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Supun

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