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Scientists advise people to lead a healthy lifestyle, but most people continue with unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can do with it?e

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In recent years,
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 around the world have adopted an unhealthy lifestyle which led them to several health problems and despite several attempts to promote a more healthy habit from the governments and related organizations, it still did resolve the issue.
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, to fix
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 ongoing problem, we need to pinpoint its exact cause which in my opinion, is due to the structural problem of the society rather than a lack of self-discipline from individuals. There are several potential factors that can lead to
people
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 facing health issues and a lot have to do with how the structural system is designed, which has shaped
people
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’s habits.
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, unhealthy diets are mostly stemmed from the fact that unhealthy meals and ingredients are cheaper than organic and healthier options which,
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, make them more affordable for
people
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 especially the working class who try to put food on the table.
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, in several nations around the world like Thailand or even the US, junk foods with high cholesterol are less expensive and more accessible than clean and healthy foods.
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 is how
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 spend long hours working per day which lowers the chance of them getting enough exercise.
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, having access to decent fitness and gyms is considered a privilege rather than a basic need. Especially in developing countries where governments do not have enough budget to spend and generally do not really pay attention to
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 aspect of
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’s lives.
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, despite knowing the cause, the solution to
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 a chronic issue is still going to be difficult and requires intervention from the government.
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, the government can try to subsidy the production of healthy ingredients and make them affordable for normal citizens. They can
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 try to build gyms and fitness as public spaces or even plan and change the city area to be a walkable city and
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, citizens can have access to cheap and free exercise. In conclusion, an unhealthy lifestyle is the result of several structural problems rather than individuals being lazy and irresponsible.
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, to intimately resolve the issue we must try to erase all the factors that can lead to
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 adopting those habits but to do so, will require not only
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’s cooperation but
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 the government’s oversight as well.

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