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some poeple think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. other believe that children who are taught to co-opearate rather than compete bocome mote useful adults.

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It is a matter of common knowledge, that people are avid to raise a
child
 successfully, it is a strong and common feeling all parents share, but applying it is usually different.
Thus
,
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 best interest is frequent discussion topics and controversial issues. While a large section of society motivates
children
 to be competitive , another thinks it is useless for childen future life. In
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 I will discuss both points of view. To commence, an entourage of a
child
 plays a vital role in his lifestyle, being surrounded by clever and smart
children
, incites one to become equal to them. It is a natural and beneficial desire, my brother is very tangible proof that
competition
 does
work
, he craved for mastering English,
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because
becaus
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 a teacher is going to gift one pupil who will get the highest grade in an exam at end of the year , it is his goal to success. Both winning and losing in
competition
 is a good life lesson for a
child
, if one wins he gains self-esteem while losing is incited to
work
 harder. It is confirmed , that in the early years,
children
 who eschew difficulties are less likely to get a promotion in a
work
.
on the other hand
,
competition
 can become the reason for envy and the bad relationship between
children
,
youngste
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youngster
youngsters
 should not only concentrate to win over someone but to enhance their knowledge for their good. Being able to
work
 in a group and accept
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 help is an essential factor in
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 since every company looking for employees who are able to cooperate. In
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 while
competition
 encourages the
child
 to become a better version of himself it can be an interference factor in his coming life.
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