You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Dhananjay, How are you? I hope

this

letter finds you well. I can not explain to you how incredibly excited I am to meet you

month. I really missed those days when we used to play tennis together. Anyways, I am not sure whether you have heard the news or not but Raj is getting married

month on September 19th, and I am afraid the wedding date is not my favour and got a clash with my travel date to Canada. I need to change the travel dates. I am really sorry about

this

last

moment change as you must have arranged your schedule according to the trip. Please accept my sincere apology for

this

change. I will leave soon after the wedding is over.

Also

, I would request you to please take off the rented car booking. Could you please reschedule the booking for September 18 for a week? See you soon! Warm regards, Ishant Kesar

Submitted by ishantkesar on Sun Sep 18 2022

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

160 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Aircraft have been increasingly used for transport fruit and vegetable to some country where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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