write a letter to invite him/her to celebrate traditional festival in your country from overseas. explain your friend about the celebration

Dear Clara, I am so delighted to write
this
letter to invite you to my hometown for celebrating our traditional festival called Onam. Have you remember the photos I have shown your
last
time and you liked
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a lot
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them alot
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alot
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a lot
.
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Onam is our harvest festival
celebrating
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only in our region in Kerala. It is celebrating for 10 days. We used to put flower carpet with
variety
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of flowers, which looks so stunning. In our place, ladies used to wear set saree during
this
time. I will buy one for you as well. The most exciting part is the games which we are playing. We used to play
tag
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of war between two groups.
Moreover
, we have
famous
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boat racing competition at the location called Asthamudi Kayal.
This
time, we will go and watch. My favourite part is the food which
know
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as 'Sadhya'
where
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it
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has around 20 vegetarian side dishes with dessert. I am sure you will enjoy all these activities
in
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this
festival and brings you
a wonderful memories
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wonderful memories
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. I am eagerly waiting for you to come and join
with
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us. Best wishes Maria
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