The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart describes the comparison of the
ages
of
people
who live in Yeven and in Italy and presents data for
years
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2000 and 2050.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the category of
people
of age 60+
years
was and is going to be prevailing in Italy.
On the other hand
, the percentage of
people
of age
from
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15 to 59
years
in Yemen will exceed in 2050. In 2000 the percentage of
ages
from 0 to 14
years
in Yemen was more than three times bigger than in Italy and was equal to 50.1%. In Italy the figures
of
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ages
of
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60+
years
was
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dramatically bigger, 24.1%, compared to Yemen’s 3.6%. The projections for 2050 for young
people
of
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ages
from
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0 to 14
years
in Italy are 11.5%,
while
for Yemen
this
number is 37.0%,
however
, in both
countries
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the number is expected to be decreased in comparison with the year 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, people, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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