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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart describes the comparison of the
ages
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 of
people
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 who live in Yeven and in Italy and presents data for
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years
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the years
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 2000 and 2050.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the category of
people
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 of age 60+
years
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 was and is going to be prevailing in Italy.
On the other hand
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, the percentage of
people
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 of age
from
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15 to 59
years
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 in Yemen will exceed in 2050. In 2000 the percentage of
ages
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 from 0 to 14
years
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 in Yemen was more than three times bigger than in Italy and was equal to 50.1%. In Italy the figures
of
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for
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ages
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of
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apply
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60+
years
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was
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were
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 dramatically bigger, 24.1%, compared to Yemen’s 3.6%. The projections for 2050 for young
people
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of
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apply
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ages
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from
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0 to 14
years
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 in Italy are 11.5%,
while
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 for Yemen
this
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 number is 37.0%,
however
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, in both
countries
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 the number is expected to be decreased in comparison with the year 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • population distribution
  • age group
  • population pyramid
  • projections
  • young population
  • aging population
  • demographic shift
  • increase in elderly population
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • population dynamics
  • top-heavy
  • balanced age distribution
  • healthcare needs
  • pension provision
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