Your friend recently came to your birthday party and bought you an expensive present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: >thank your friend > explain how useful the present is > arrange to meet up with your friend sometime soon Write at least 150 words.

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Dear James, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter to thank you for the amazing present that you gave me on my birthday. I am delighted that you came to my birthday party that was held on

2nd

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the 2nd

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this

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month. Until I

open

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opened

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your present I

haven't

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hadn't

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imagined that you would buy me an

expencive

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expensive

mobile phone as a gift for my birthday. Thank you so much for

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present. I love

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mobile a lot and it has a lot of

feature

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features

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. I thought of buying

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exact mobile

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year,

unfortunately

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unfortunately,

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I haven't had enough money at that time.

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is really helpful for me as I am working in the call

center

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centre

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mobile allows me to add more than ten

person

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people

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in a conference call.

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this

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this,

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I am able to complete my work more

quicker

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quickly

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. I would

glad

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be glad

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if I

have

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had

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a chance to meet you again before

to move

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moving

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chennai

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Chennai

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. I am free on

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Thursday and Friday. Let me know if you have time on those days, so

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can go for dinner together. See you soon. Yours lovingly, Sarah.

r.harip3Mon May 20 2024

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spellings

Make sure to proofread your writing for minor errors to ensure it appears polished. For instance, the word 'expencive' should be 'expensive' and 'feature' should be 'features'.

language

When expressing the idea that you want to meet, be assertive and clear about the arrangement to ensure it communicates your intention effectively. You could rephrase 'I would glad if I have a chance to meet you again before to move to chennai.' to 'I would be glad to meet you again before I move to Chennai.'

punctuation

Pay attention to punctuation to improve readability. For instance, 'Thank you so much for this present. I love this mobile a lot and it has a lot of feature.' can be split into: 'Thank you so much for this present. I love this mobile a lot, and it has many features.'

task achievement

You have effectively thanked your friend for the birthday present and provided a clear explanation of its usefulness.

coherence cohesion

The letter has a clear structure with a proper introduction, body, and conclusion.

task achievement

The writing tone is friendly and appropriate for a letter to a friend.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

197 words

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