In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is widely considered that in Britain
seniors
should live in nursing homes paid
by
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their families.
However
, there are people who think that the
government
must cover these expenses.
This
essay agrees with the
second
statement and describes a few main reasons why the
government
must take care of our elder citizens.
Firstly
, everyone should deserve to spend their
last
years not worrying about their family's financial situation and still receive professional medical assistance. So, the best thing the
government
can do is to pay for
this
, as during their lives,
seniors
already paid a lot of taxes and should not depend on relatives.
This
opportunity is especially important for people who are
aging
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alone and do not have any immediate family members to rely on.
For example
,
the
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recent research on life expectancy demonstrated that
seniors
who did not have to worry about paying nursing
home's
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home
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fees lived up to 5 years longer and
healthier
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in comparison with those whose families had to pay for that.
Secondly
, the fact that the
government
takes care of all the bills nursing homes may submit, can set very nice life standards in the country.
This
may help to create a socially expected
behavior
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when each elder person is treated with respect.
Besides
, those individuals may feel needed and loved even when they are the
last
ones from their families who are alive. Here the
government
plays a huge role. To prove
this
point of view, look at Japan, where each senior citizen is taken care of no matter their finances or
statuses
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status
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.
Such
expectations can help to
rise
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a proper mentality in young generations. To summarize, there are definitely benefits of the
government
paying for nursing homes. It allows elder people to spend the
last
years of life in comfortable places, receive all the required assistance and not
to
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worry about finances while still helping all society members to maintain a proper attitude to
seniors
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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