It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is neccessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is vital for children to learn to differentiate what is acceptable and what is not acceptable at

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in life to function properly.

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necessary to

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punish them because

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to remove valuable items for them,

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as toys. Learning social norms and

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is highly recommended because these norms are already a system of

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child eventually will become an adult that will need to

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within norms

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society. More importantly, pre-teens who

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discipline eventually end up

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jail because they have broken the

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society.

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for minor

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as chewing gum in public

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they can

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to jail.

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strong regulations have

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in that city. It is well known

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on human behaviour, so it is preferable to discipline

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letting them

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play video games, or not visiting a loved friend, so

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will let them

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think what they have done wrong, and modified their

behaviours

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type of punishment

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to be accompanied by

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small talk in which an adult let them know

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is a method to help them to mature and grow. To

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physical abuse had been treated with some type of physical punishment as a child, so

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proved that a victim sometimes

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a perpetrator. To conclude, it is essential to teach children the difference between right and wrong at

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to avoid them

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the

rules

in the future;

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should not be with physical punishment or

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them, and the best method is to remove precious items from them to

modelate

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modulate

moderate

their

behaviours

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