Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public healthand that other measure are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that some societies believe that adding amenities to

sport

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is the ultimate approach to

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public well-being. But,

on the other hand

, other

people

say that

this

way has less effect on

people

's fit.

Thus

, it needs another standard. In my opinion, increasing

sports

facilities

should be aligned with other strategies to escalate society's healthiness. In terms of

fitness

facilities

, it is believed as one of the best ways to urge

community

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to improve their health through exercise. When public

sports

are added as a public facility with affordable prices or even free, it will trigger

people

to do physical

act

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regularly without hesitation.

For example

, the local government can open a free jogging track which will push the neighbourhood warmhearted to do physical activity.

However

, is it the optimal approach to

increase

public

fitness

? In my opinion, adding

sports

should be balanced with other improvements,

such

as healthy food and wellness. Different from that, there is a view that

sports

facilities

have little effect on

people

's health. It makes sense since a man with excellent physical training regularly yet smoking will not obtain optimum

fitness

.

Furthermore

,

fitness

should be aligned with other improvements

such

as healthy food, a good environment, and wellness habits.

Thus

, albeit needing effort, simultaneously will

increase

healthiness optimally. I am in line with

this

balance to obtain optimum wellness. In conclusion, public

fitness

can be increased by adding

sports

amenities.

However

, another perspective is that

sport

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facilities

improvement is inadequate; there are other ways to obtain that goal.

Therefore

, I consider that balancing both ways:

sports

facilities

and aligning them with other modifications

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will be the best measure to

increase

public health.