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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Abortion
 is always a sensitive topic for every country, especially the land the religion is as important as the law. Some people believe that
abortion
 is nothing but a horrible decision, while some people respect the
rights
 of
women
's bodies.
This
 essay will show you the season why
abortion
 should be legal. Somehow the most significant responsibility is responsible for what we have done, but
abortion
 is not on the list of duties.
For example
, people may enjoy having sex without protection, but
instead
 of keeping the baby, they decide to have an
abortion
 to push their problem away.
Moreover
,
abortion
 is the worst sin in a country where religion is the stick and significant, like in Thailand and the Philippines, where religion is glorious. From my point of view, we couldn't say that the termination of pregnancy is an immoral responsibility. Many pieces of research show that many problems come after unintentional pregnancy,
such
 as physical health after an illegal
abortion
, the total population, the violence in families, etc.
Furthermore
,
women
 should have the right to their bodies, not anyone else.
Women
's
rights
 are as necessary as human
rights
. In conclusion, I agree that
abortion
 should be legal because it is the right thing to do to support
women
's
rights
, and it can prevent the problem that could come after an illegal
abortion
.
Furthermore
, under the law that
abortion
 was legal, the individuals who think that
abortion
 is not the right thing to do can still make their own decision not to have an
abortion
. It is human
rights
Fix the agreement mistake
right
show examples
.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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