It is impossible to help all people around the world in need so governments should focus on people from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that giving aid to every individual
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globe
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is not possible
thus
government
’s concentration should be on their own
society
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need.
Although
I believe that governments should help if they are able to I
also
strongly agree that they cannot help out
with
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every citizen around the world and
hence
they
are
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ought to focus on local needs before others. If the
government
give out international
helps
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,
then
they can guarantee that throughout difficulties or troubles they would
also
be given a hand.
For example
, the time when there was an earthquake in Turkey Izmir, France was the
first
to offer support while the Izmir citizens were in a very big disaster and it was a big tragedy for all.
Therefore
, the relationship between France and
turkey
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got stronger
that
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time and Turkey consider
himself
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indebted to France and stands ready to help them if they
also
go through any disaster. Another reason that
government
should help others is humanity. It is human nature to help when there is
ability
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to do so. On
whole
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it seems impossible to help every individual in all
nation
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however
they can give aid to some nations or go for help when there is a natural disaster or a big tragedy somewhere.
However
, I assume that the priority and focus of countries should be on
domestic
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community. When a society has followed and elected a
government
, that
government
now is responsible for the society and has
duty
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to meet the needs of its people. The
government
has a huge responsibility to provide products and services
which
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individuals cannot get themselves like making roads, bridges, green areas and public transportation and all the other public needs.
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,
government
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has to provide survival and security.
Thus
they should support their own locals
first
so they can survive. They should make themselves strong enough
hence
they will be able to continue and be safe. The other reason is that if the
government
don
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not put
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themselves before the others
then
they may fall
during
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any
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trouble and not only they cannot help themselves they would
also
be a challenge to other countries and put them
in
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difficulty
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to solve their problems. In conclusion, in my
opinion
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it is I agree with the statement that it is very important for governments to help their own locals before the other nations around the globe. It is essential to meet their own needs
first
.
Then
after they may be able to give a hand to other citizens around the globe too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • limited resources
  • moral obligation
  • global stability
  • economic impact
  • domestic issues
  • international aid
  • diplomatic relationships
  • resource allocation
  • healthcare
  • education
  • infrastructure
  • national priorities
  • desperate need
  • indirect benefit
  • goodwill
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