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In some cultures, children are often toldthat they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of given children this message?

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The line graph illustrates the variety of
air
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pollutants
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' sources in Great Britain, namely
industry
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,
transport
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 and household, from 1990 to 2005, in
million
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tonnes
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. Overall, it is clear that the highest
air
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 pollutant belonged to the
industry
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 section at the beginning of the period, with a slight fall over the following fifteen years, the total amount of
air
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pollutants
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, meanwhile, decreased in the consecutive years. From 1990 to 2002, it can be seen that while all the figures declined,
the
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transport
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's figure fluctuated in these years, and at
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, increased to around 2.5
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
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, the decreasing rate of
industry
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 section was much more than households sources; whereas, it dropped from around 6 to 2
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tonnes
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, equalling the
transport
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 section at the end of
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 period. From 2002 onwards, the figures for transportation continued to surge, and reached the peak
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million
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tonnes
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, in 2005.
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, the rest of the other
air
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 pollution sources dropped to 2 and 0 for
industry
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 and households respectively.
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 the
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 of
transport
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pollutants
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 surged, the total amount of
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pollutants
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 fell in
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 particular country, between 1990 and 2005.
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