Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

It is Some argued that

museums

should be built to entertain

people

,while others believe that their purpose is to educate. As for meIn my opinion, I believe the role of

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should be educational.

Firstly

, the reason why most

people

many think it should be an enjoyable place

museums

are mainly for enjoyment is that they regard it as a photo-taking landmark opportunity. With the development of media fields various media and technology, encourages more vloggers individuals and

infleuncersor

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influencers

‘ups’

visit

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the imposing signature buildings which help them to produce outstanding photos., as they have

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relatively

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popularity,

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many

yMany

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Many

of these younger

people

are popular and not interested in the deeper youngsters will ignore the true meanings of the

museum

and follow their steps, .some of them require

museums

to build up some spectacular ornaments to have a superior site that good for selfie

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China

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,China

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there have been recent petitions online to build or renovate

museums

to enhance the quality of exhibits for taking selfies with famous works of art and historic

artifacts

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artefacts

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.

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, I

agree

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the latter view that

which

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the

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museums

is

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are

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are

to

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apply

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for

education

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educating

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educate

people

. It is respectful that

people

built up

museums

is

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apply

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for yearning the past most

museums

were build

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for exactly

this

reason.

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, in Peking, the Palace

Museum

is

the

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a powerful

landmarks

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of

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ChinaChinese

history

. It represents the

history

of the Ming and Qing dynasty and is regarded as the most educational foundation for

people

both Chinese and foreign tourists interested in the

history

of China.no matter is Chinese or the tourists in different

colors

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colours

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to know more about the country and the story hidden back. Individuals who come away from

such

museums

can apply their deeper understanding not only to their life but

also

feel their cultural identity is clearer. Paying the revere is the basic requirement for

people

their entering the

museum

as we are facing our ancestors’ story and

learn

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learning

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to be grateful and understand why we need to cherish the memory of the dead soldiers. In conclusion,

people

many regard

museums

as a kind of real-life

history

book for youngsters and a place we need to protect well.

Therefore

, I

agree

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believe the

museum

is to educate

people

to understand the past and to be grateful for it