Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. Do you agree or dis agree?

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Many
people
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believe that so as to resolve traffic and transportation
problems
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,
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population
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should be induced to immigrate
suburbs
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. Moving out to suburbs might solve the
problems
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by reducing
population
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. In
this
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essay, I will argue that living in
countryside
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the countryside
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may bring about many
problems
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and we cannot solve
these problem
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with
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this
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way.
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, the world today is global and
people
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live in a huge
community
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communities
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.
Cities
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offer more occasion for society
also
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there are many
opportunity
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opportunities
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such
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as
job
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jobs
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, socializing,
education
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and education
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.
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, the
best known
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universities are located in
cities
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,
the
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most valuable companies build their facilities in the city
centers
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such
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as Silicon Valley. If we encourage
people
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to move out to
countryside
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the countryside
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, they cannot easily accept and there will be a series of conflicts among
people
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who live in
cities
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.
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, allocating human power
into
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to
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city
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cities
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and suburbs can be a very useful solution because we can break down
irregular
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the irregular
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of
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apply
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the population
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population
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populations
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who
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apply
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hold in
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a city
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city
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cities
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densely.
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,
increasing
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the increasing
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population
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in
cities
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leads to cause pollution. Reducing vehicle
create
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a fully open roads
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a fully open road
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for public transportation.
People
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who travel in commute time go to their jobs easily. To summarize, encouraging
people
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to live in villages is so much
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to try
it
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apply
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than think it. Authorities may face many
problems
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which do not have any solution
although
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in
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the
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apply
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scratch it was providing a solution to a lot of
countries’
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countries
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difficulties. They try to develop effective strategies to manage it.
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