Many
people
believe that so as to resolve traffic and transportation
problems
,
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should be induced to immigrate
suburbsChange preposition
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. Moving out to suburbs might solve the
problems
by reducing
population
. In
this
essay, I will argue that living in
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may bring about many
problems
and we cannot solve
these problemChange the determiner
this problem
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withChange preposition
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this
way.
Firstly
, the world today is global and
people
live in a huge
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.
Cities
offer more occasion for society
also
there are many
opportunityChange to a plural noun
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such
as
jobFix the agreement mistake
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, socializing,
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.
For example
, the
best knownAdd a hyphen
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universities are located in
cities
,
theCorrect word choice
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most valuable companies build their facilities in the city
centersChange the spelling
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such
as Silicon Valley. If we encourage
people
to move out to
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, they cannot easily accept and there will be a series of conflicts among
people
who live in
cities
.
However
, allocating human power
intoChange preposition
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cityFix the agreement mistake
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and suburbs can be a very useful solution because we can break down
irregularCorrect article usage
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of Change preposition
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populationFix the agreement mistake
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who Correct pronoun usage
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hold in
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cityFix the agreement mistake
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densely.
In addition
,
increasingCorrect article usage
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population
in
cities
leads to cause pollution. Reducing vehicle
createChange the verb form
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a fully open roadsCorrect the article-noun agreement
a fully open road
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for public transportation.
People
who travel in commute time go to their jobs easily.
To summarize, encouraging
people
to live in villages is so much
difficultCorrect quantifier usage
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to try
it Correct pronoun usage
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than think it. Authorities may face many
problems
which do not have any solution
although
in Change preposition
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the Correct article usage
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scratch it was providing a solution to a lot of
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difficulties. They try to develop effective strategies to manage it.