Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity. However, some people feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society
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believe that it has positive effects while other
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possible
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reasons Correct your spelling
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shopping popularity as well as how it influence society.
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, there are several reasons why shopping become popular. One of them is online shopping which brings an easy and seamless approach for Change preposition
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people
are looking for without visiting outlets physically. Another overlooked reason is that banks provide cashback, as well as stores, offer different types of discounts for their customers. If individuals receive even a tiny percentage of their waste as a gift, they will be highly encouraged to spend more. In addition
to that, stores provide attractive offers like "buy two and get one for free". With this
in mind, people
are willing to spend more money as they suppose they will get less price or more products.
When it comes to matters of shopping effects, some people
tend to have a misguided opinion about negative consequences that more and more people
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finding, however
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developing close relationships. At the same time, shopping might be a cure for stress. Whereas my parents like visit
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anything, it still helps me relieve the stress.
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as well as stores
persuade customers to purchase Add the comma(s)
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any
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cashbacks
and special offers. Correct your spelling
cashback
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relationship
relationships
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