Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays many people are suffering from different kinds of diseases.

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can play an important role

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curing and guiding their

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about their health issues. I agree with

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opinion and the following paragraphs highlight my opinion with relevant examples.

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with, there should be a proper bonding between the

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and the patient.

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, the

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should behave in

friendly

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and comfortable

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with the

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, and in

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way

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people can explain

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apply

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the symptoms and feelings of pain or others.

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,

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of weeks ago, I

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from

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fever and I went to

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the clinic

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.

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, my family

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had listen to me very humbly and gave me some suggestions and medicine.

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these days

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doctors

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educate their

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about diet

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and

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of taking tablets.

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, one can aware

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his weakness and how to overcome that by

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the implementation

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implementation

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of prescription.

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, a good

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elaborates

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thing written on the prescription about how

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and when the injections and supplements are taken and

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of these multivitamins.

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, the

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of cure and

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should be very appropriate.

Doctors

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can stable the blood pressure and nerves by giving their

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a

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moral support.

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, if a

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is examine

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the eyes of a child, he should talk to him about things like his studies and toys in

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way

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child will

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the pain and will not be frightened. In conclusion,

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are very

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and ambitious regarding

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deals with people they are good motivators for their

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to fight against serious diseases. All in all,

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are responsible for educating their

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.