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director of large companies earn much higher salaries than ordinary employees do . some people think that it is neccesary , but other think that it ie unfair , discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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It is debatable that the directors of large organizations
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 more than other
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employees
empolyees
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employees
. Some
people
 believe that
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it
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totally depend on the responsibilities as well as education . Many masses argue that it is valid whilst
other
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 think that it is unfair . In
this
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i
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 am going to elaborate
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 given topic and show my approval of
this
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To begin
 with , many
people
 feel unfair when it comes to the pay scale .
Moreover
, some
people
 think that
managers
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 salaries
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 than ordinary
workers
. It is an undeniable fact that
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many of them think that salary should be based on
growth
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 of companies
instead
 of
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 of
worker
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 .
In addition
 to that , regular
workers
 work more and
also
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 extra hours .
This
 approach may affect the
workers
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 mood regarding work as well as create poor motivation among the
workers
 . On the other side , these
people
 do not understand that salary is not directly proportional to the amount
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of
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od
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 work done. It is all about the responsibilities and education and they
also
 manage the team very well . The contribution to the
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 growth should not be ignored. Many directors travel a lot to different places for
betterment
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 of companies.
Therefore
 , it is justifiable that pay high compensation to the directors of
such
 organizations. in conclusion , every company
empolyers
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employers
employees
 feel that pay
sacle
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scale
 should be equal . But my opinion is that managers should be paid higher than other for
smooth
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 functioning of
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the institution
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.
Submitted by Harsh prajapati  on

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