An organisation has given an advertisement for part time volunteering job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organisation in your letter introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for this. Job State when you will be able to join

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Dear Mr John, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in the volunteer work which you have advertised in the local newspaper. I’m happy to share my details so that you can make a team according to your needs. I’m Santosh Srinivas who is 20 years old doing my Bachelor of Computers at the Perth State University and participating in the volunteer programs related to my university. I feel I will be a suitable person for the job with my previous experience at the “Childcare Foundation” which is a non-profit organisation and do free service jobs in collecting funds, giving seminars and organising stalls at the events. Because of my semester exams commencing

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week I will be busy preparing for my exams and will be available from the

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week of November, with the finish of exams I can participate more actively which helps to get a good break from my routine college schedule. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Regards Santosh.

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An organisation has given an advertisement for part time volunteering job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organisation in your letter introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for this. Job State when you will be able to join

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Nuclear energy is better than other sources of energy to meet the increasing need. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

Some teachers tend to reward students who achieve high academic results, others, however, support and reward students that show the most improvement. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that a person's culture is defined by their country of origin, while others believe that has only a minor influence. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?