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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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Thank to, modern technologies the
crime
 rate is significantly decreased so, so they are one of the best obstacles in front of
criminals
. From my perspective
this
 point of view does not reflect the objective reality,
therefore
 there is not any prover shrink
crime
 rate and
furthermore
,
criminals
 have modernized simultaneously with their methods with the policies. Modern
technology
 facilitates all space so, so finding
criminals
 and fighting against
crime
 is one of the best examples,
however
, there is a big question from
that is
 it possible for all these gadgets and
technology
 to deal with solving a
crime
?
First
 of all, governments should take into account that
criminals
 are
also
 informed of all types of innovations
thus
, they approach new
crime
 methodology and
technology
.
Secondly
, all
this
 improvement makes people much more approachable to cyber attacks, hacking and fishing attack. Recently society is heard about new crimes
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technology
such
 as
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cyberbullying
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, hacking bank accounts, cyber attacks, and so on,
however
 governments and companies fighting there with cybersecurity and applications
such
 as antivirus programs, and unfortunately, they are not able to completely secure
this
 attack.
Furthermore
, obsolid
criminals
such
 as terrorists, illegal gambling, and drug and arms Diller facilitate the improvement of technologies and they can spread their business all over the world. Modern technologies have helped to considerably reduce
crime
, making them one of the finest barriers against
criminals
. According to my perspective,
this
 point of view does not accurately reflect the objective truth,
hence
 there is no evidence that the
crime
 rate has decreased.
In addition
,
criminals
 are continuously modernizing their tactics in relation to law enforcement.
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