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In the future, all cars, buses, trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers? Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
technology
 is improving at an amazing rate and soon there will be different vehicles which will not need an operator at all. In my ,opinion
this
 type of
technology
 has more positive attributes compared to negative attributes. The
technology
 that will make driverless
cars
 and buses possible has numerous advantages.
Firstly
, it will use Artificial Intelligence, which will utilize a bank of data to make the drive possible.
In addition
 to
this
, it will cause fewer accidents in ideal traffic conditions.
Secondly
,
this
 new
technology
 will use more modern vehicles
such
 as hybrid
cars
, which work on electricity.
Therefore
, they will conserve fossil fuels and carbon emissions.
Finally
, These AI
cars
 will be very helpful for the physically impaired.
For example
, by using
this
technology
, people who are blind or have paralyzed legs or arms could easily commute to different places.
Additionally
,
this
 will help people to save time.
For instance
, students could work on assignments and presentations during their travelling. Alternatively, these vehicles have disadvantages as well. These automobiles will use sophisticated machinery which will in turn increase the production cost and will make them costly for the general public.
This
technology
 is still in the developmental stages and is not 100% accurate.
As a result
, there is a chance that
this
 could cause an error or trouble in the proper functioning of the car.
Moreover
, Artificial
technology
 despite its integrated machinery cannot mimic human reasoning or decision-making ability.
For example
,
this
 machinery will fail in types of law disruptions
such
 as signal breakage. In conclusion, I would like to say that even though these driverless
cars
 have some drawbacks but their advantages overcome them. In
this
 era of technological ,advancements
this
 could lead to a huge revolution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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