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The arts including art, music and theatre and considered to be important to the society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern Lifestyle? Should the arts be included in the curriculum?

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Art
, one of the important aspects of society with
change
 in era
change
 in
art
 is always observed. It has many forms like music, theatre, paintings etc all of which are an important part of human civilization.
This
 essay will discuss, the place of
art
 in the modern lifestyle and whether or not it should be included in the curriculum.
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 what is
art
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an art
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 and what is its importance
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Art
 has always been a medium
of
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 expressing thoughts, feelings and emotions.
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 just not a word, it has many names dance,music etc all of which are considered a form of
art
, sometimes these arts were so influential that they have changed the tide of
war
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for example
: during revolution many songs were written which influenced revolutionaries to the extent that burned the castle and uprooted the government.
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art
 is and
this
 is
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 importance of it. With the
change
 in time
change
 in
art
 is observed. Modern-day
art
 is way different
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 it used to be but it is as important as always . It is basically a form of communication and that's not it , it
also
 helps in making people/artist creative, increasing
there
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 thought process . Though
the
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art
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its importance has not it
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 important as it always
have
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 been even in the modern lifestyle. To make our society more perfect and to prosper
art
 should be included in the curriculum. Young minds should be introduced to the wonders of
art
 at the early stage of their journey so that their little minds grow and prosper as they are the future of society. Though the form of
art
 has changed it still has
it's
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 place in the modern lifestyle and it will always have its place no matter what era is it. Including it in the education system is very helpful and essential and should be done.
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