In many countries, school-age children are spending their free time in doing homework. Is it a good or bad thing? What is your opinion? Give examples to support your view.
Education plays a pivotal role in everybody's life. In most countries, offspring in schools are spending most of their spare
time
completing their homework
. There are some advantages and disadvantages to spending their leisure time
doing homework
. In this
essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then
I will give my opinion on this
matter with some relevant examples.
On the one side, In this
modern era, there is huge competition in the education system. Offspring are improving their knowledge
in academics by spending most of their spare time
doing homework
. For instance
, In India, Intermediate students
are spending at most 16 hours per day to score the best rank in the EAMCET exam. By doing Homework
students
can improve their empirical knowledge
in academics. Nowadays, Empirical knowledge
is more important than theoretical knowledge
. For instance
, Nowadays, parents have been supporting their children to improve their practical skills
in academics so they are buying computers for their offspring.
On the other side, Children should try to spend their spare time
doing art
activities like sports, painting, music, etc. because arts improve skills
indirectly both practically and academically. For instance
, In India, Art
students
scored high marks on SAT exams compared to non-art
students
because this
exam is related to Aptitude. By spending leisure time
on art
activities, students
can avoid stress in their life because most people are suffering from stress disorders due to pressure.
To sum up, In my view, spending their leisure time
with homework
have both advantages and disadvantages. But students
should try to gain knowledge
by focusing more on improving empirical skills
and art
skills
.Submitted by madarapulavanya1998 on
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