Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

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Dear Ravi, How have you been? I am so excited to write

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letter to inform you about the book which helped me a lot all the way during the presentation of my topic on " Global financial crisis and impact on education system" and I am glad to have

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a nice friend like you. As you know, as part of my graduation project work I need to submit a presentation on any of the most recent topics despite the regular exams at the university.

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, without

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presentation we cannot get a certificate

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is much needed and crucial to obtain recognition from the local government as well. Having said that, I was looking for a topic and suddenly

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book helped me to figure out the numerous points. I was over the moon while preparing notes and I am so ecstatic right after my findings and observations of the topic.

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, the entire team was mesmerized by the notes and they were impressed by the breathtaking pace of the all striking aspects. I cannot wait anymore to offer a party and I look forward to hearing your`s availability and I hope we will meet soon. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

203 words

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Your colleague recently gave you a book. You had a presentation, and this book helped you in the presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, • tell the topic of your presentation • why the presentation was important for you • how the book helped you in presentation

Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trand is a positive or negative development.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, owning a home rathen than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situations?

Many people think that countries should import less food and produce more for their population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?